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present practice. Noticing the bold use of the strict gerund in the first, we conclude that the author is a sound gerundite, faithful in spite of all temptations; but a few pages later comes the needless relapse into fused participle.
I remember old Colney's once, in old days, calling that kind of marriage a sarcophagus.—Meredith.
She had thought in her heart that Mr. Barmby espousing the girl would smoothe a troubled prospect.—Meredith.
The following looks like a deliberate avoidance of both constructions by a writer who is undecided between the two. Its being is what should have been written.
I do not say that the advice is not sound, or complain that it is given. I do deprecate that it should be taken.—Times.
And perhaps a shyness of something's being shown accounts for the next odd arrangement; it is true that entire recasting is what is called for.
There being shown to be something radically defective in the management of the Bank led to the appointment of a Committee.—H. D. Macleod.
2. When must the subject of the gerund (or infinitive) be expressed, and when omitted?
This is not a controversial matter like the last; the principles are quite simple, and will be accepted; but it is necessary to state and illustrate them because they are often forgotten. As the same mistakes are sometimes made with the infinitive, that is to be considered as included.
Roughly, the subject of the gerund (or infinitive) should be expressed if it is different from, and omitted if it is the same as, the subject of the sentence. To omit it when different is positively wrong, and may produce actual ambiguity or worse, though sometimes there is only a slipshod effect; to insert it when the same is generally clumsy.
No one would say 'I succeeded to his property upon dying', because, I being the subject of the sentence, my is naturally suggested instead of the necessary his as subject of the gerund; the his must be inserted before dying, even though