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He begged me to give over all unlawful pursuits, saying, that if persisted in, they were sure of bringing a person to destruction.–Borrow.
7. Enumeration.
This name, liberally interpreted, is meant to include several more or less distinct questions. They are difficult, and much debated by authorities on punctuation, but are of no great importance. We shall take the liberty of partly leaving them undecided, and partly giving arbitrary opinions; to argue them out would take more space than it is worth while to give. But it is worth while to draw attention to them, so that each writer may be aware that they exist, and at least be consistent with himself. Typical sentences (from Beadnell) are:
a. Industry, honesty, and temperance, are essential to happiness.–B.
b. Let us freely drink in the soul of love and beauty and wisdom, from all nature and art and history.–B.
c. Plain honest truth wants no colouring.–B.
d. Many states are in alliance with, and under the protection of France.–B.
Common variants for (a) are (1) Industry, honesty and temperance are essential... (2) Industry, honesty and temperance, are essential... (3) Industry, honesty, and temperance are essential... We unhesitatingly recommend the original and fully stopped form, which should be used irrespective of style, and not be interfered with by rhetorical considerations; it is the only one to which there is never any objection. Of the examples that follow, the first conforms to the correct type, but no serious harm would be done if it did not. The second also conforms; and, if this had followed variant (1) or (2), here indistinguishable, we should have been in danger of supposing that Education and Police were one department instead of two. The third, having no comma after interests, follows variant (3), and, as it happens, with no bad effect on the meaning. All three variants, however, may under different conditions produce ambiguity or worse.